imaginarygarden Literary Excursions with Kerry ~ Metafiction
She’s a shoe string that won’t stay tied
dares you to double knot her, pull tight,
she’ll still slip loose like a boat and drift
the currents and tides of her fancies.
You can’t pin her down like a butterfly
in a frame, not even with golden pins
she’ll grin and wriggle away.
She is an enigma, a fairy tale, a fable
with a moral at the end. Truth, fiction,
fantasy and cold, hard fact. She’s words-
worth and a p(l)ath through the fields,
a pound of wilde, a frost that burns.
(See what I did there?) And now she’s donne…
till the next poem is written in the sand.
Clever
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Oooo, poems written in the sand. Like the ones that come at 3am and aren’t there when you wake up. Love the imagery here.
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Like the ones that come at 3am and aren’t there when you wake up….I like that
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i liked what you did (there)
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She’s words-
worth and a p(l)ath through the fields,
a pound of wilde, a frost that burns.
I love what you did here, Debi.. soooo clever!
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Thanks 🙂
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I want to dance to this, while running around giggling at words, loose
pages and plotting. Misky is right, “Clever”! and delicious. Love the wordplay (name play?) and the visual spitting of p(i)ath. Just yummy, and so true.
And the pause between “cold” and “hard fact”? pure brilliance!
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I’ve not idea why my “l” turned into an “i”. Maybe it saw something I didn’t. :p
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Thanks Magaly
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She’s words-
worth and a p(l)ath through the fields,
a pound of wilde, a frost that burns.
Love this! Brilliant write, Debi ❤️
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Thanks Sanaa
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Oh I did see what you did there… would like those poems in the sand… (could be a bit like blogging)…
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Writing poems and reading poetry, two wonderful pastimes! Nothing like being creative!
Hank
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Ha ha ha. I love this!
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Loved it. You pay homage while acknowledging the damage and dance of it, resolving with the ever-erasing words writ on sand.
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Thanks, Brendan.
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